I’m Writing a Research Paper on Eating Disorders.. Is This a Good Thesis?

Question by KxDxJ: I’m writing a research paper on eating disorders.. is this a good thesis?
Okay, basically I want to explain the different kinds of eating disorders, how they are different, how they can damage the body, and the “causes” of ed’s…..

Is this a good theses?

There are many different kinds of eating disorders, all of which are extremely dangerous.

I’m not happy with it, but I can’t think of any other way to word it.. Can somebody give me advice on how to improve it please?

Best answer:

Answer by MysticHippie
While your thesis presents your information, it lacks perspective. You need to change it so that it is arguable.

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